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Thrush(wing) of WindClan

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Is is Thrush(wing), a WindClan warrior in my fanfiction/roleplay.
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

critique time <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt=":la:" title="La la la la"/>

Colors
well for the eye it looks like you only did 1 layer cause it isn't straight if you know what i mean...

Lines
look a bit sloppy..
black lines are good..
that what i always use x3..
try making the ends like this .3.
if you want though xD
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Anatomy
Im not sure but if you dont then u should ^^
maybe for the head make a dot then when you are doing the lines draw on it .3.
it is helpful

Style
I like your style so keep it up

Nice work~~
^^
keep it up >W<