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Contest Entry For Riku-Cat

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It's...okay in my opinion ewe

The legs are terrible. I mean seriously. '~'

Oh well! :iconimhappyplz: This is my contest entry for *Riku-Cat. Hope you like it Riku!

Want to join the contest? It's not too late to enter! [link]

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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Ok first thing's first, Ill do the negatives then the positives. Remember, as I always say, Im typing this as a fellow artist AND friend.

First off, the eyes. Their a bit to squiggly, they look like beans a tad... Your body anatomy is a bit better. Except the legs are too skinny. The front legs look like they were just glued on inside of being attached to the cat's body. That's why most feline artists have a tuft at the top of the legs so it doesn't have that effect.

The tail's impressive :3 A bit to symmetrical though, it's to stiff up in the air.

The ears look a bit to dis-figured. One looks like a tortilla chip and the other one looks like the edge of the blade of a curved dagger. Your nose could be a bit smaller to, and not so straight on the edges. Cat's noses are more heart shaped than a triangle.

The background is epic though, it could be a tad more blurred but besides that it's fine.